Expert Preparation for Australian School Assessments

Where to Find Educator Comments on Your Persuasive Essay Drafts

 Persuasive writing improves when students understand how effectively their arguments communicate with a reader.

If your persuasive essay has been submitted to Ezyxam for educator evaluation, locate the relevant submission through your writing or assessment history.

Open the completed evaluation and read the educator comments carefully.

Look beyond the score.

Identify feedback about:

  • Position or contention

  • Argument development

  • Evidence and examples

  • Paragraph structure

  • Cohesion

  • Vocabulary

  • Sentence variety

  • Grammar

  • Persuasive techniques

Then choose the most important improvement.

For example, if your argument is clear but your supporting evidence is weak, focus your next essay on developing stronger examples and explanations.

Do not attempt to fix every weakness simultaneously.

Writing development works best through repeated cycles of:

Write → Receive feedback → Identify priority → Apply → Rewrite.

You can also compare feedback across multiple essays.

If the same issue appears repeatedly, it should become a specific learning goal.

Have educator feedback available? Open your persuasive-writing evaluation on Ezyxam and identify one concrete improvement to apply to your next essay.